Haha, nice work, Michael. Nothing like a jump into a cool swimming pool on a hot summer's day!
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
So often, I open a page to your poetry and am instantly struck by the wonderful layouts you employ. If book covers are made to draw a reader to a book, or flowers made to entice the bee, then your formats grab my .....
Anyway, truly enthralling just to look at with a lovely use of alliteration at the start and, like "Ice-cream for two", you have really captured the moment here - the sounds and the very feel of entering the pool.
All the very best,
This one made me laugh and brought back a picture memory of my lovely Aunty Frances..pictured 'somewhere' in Spain doing exactly the same thing..at the end of the journey down the slide...arms in the air in Geronimo fashion totally unaware that she had lost her bikini top somewhere in the tube...