Beautiful words and lots of comfort in them as well. Life can get you down sometimes and to think if all the good things at such times can bring deep comfort indeed.
You and me will see it all through
You may feel alone but don't ever despair
'Cause just for you, I will always be there..
My favourite lines
Well done Peter x
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
As Ingrid says, a lovely write Peter that flowed beautifully and carried a weighty message with it too. Keep looking at the positives in your life, not the negatives, and certainly not the negative people.
Well done and all the very best,
Those thoughts were beautifully penned with effortless rhyme and flow. It reads so smoothly and at the same time carries a meaningful message for the person intended. Never give up no matter what, never loose sight even when you are made fun off..really liked this read :)
Such a lovely write Peter. Life can knock you down and then we pick ourselves up and keep moving. We may cry for a little while and here comes a smile. I love the ending of this piece. Truly enjoyed reading.