Comments : Thoughts.. (resubmitted poem)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Well, the RHR strikes again:)

    Beautiful words and lots of comfort in them as well. Life can get you down sometimes and to think if all the good things at such times can bring deep comfort indeed.

    You and me will see it all through
    You may feel alone but don't ever despair
    'Cause just for you, I will always be there..

    ^^
    My favourite lines

    Well done Peter x

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As Ingrid says, a lovely write Peter that flowed beautifully and carried a weighty message with it too. Keep looking at the positives in your life, not the negatives, and certainly not the negative people.
    Well done and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Peter,

    Your poetry has a quality that I admire. The meter and rhyme of course, but more that this, the contained message:

    The world has cruel 'cold' people in it and they can cause pain without feeling remorse. A message about devotion and friendship that will endure and can be relied upon.

    Well done Peter,

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by NOOR

    Very sweet poem to encourage people to use their inner warm to beat cold people. See no evil. Hear no evil. Speak no evil. :-)

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Those thoughts were beautifully penned with effortless rhyme and flow. It reads so smoothly and at the same time carries a meaningful message for the person intended. Never give up no matter what, never loose sight even when you are made fun off..really liked this read :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Such a lovely write Peter. Life can knock you down and then we pick ourselves up and keep moving. We may cry for a little while and here comes a smile. I love the ending of this piece. Truly enjoyed reading.