Comments : Awakening Fallen Angel 20

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Of all the pieces I have read from this mammoth series, this strikes me as the most visual - mostly from a horrific (but wonderful) view!

    "The beast that had long since drove his mind clambered out from his ear like a crash victim" - I love that. (Driven his mind?)

    My favourite has to be the bit about sweat pouring from every orifice, though, lol

    Can he win against faith? Can faith win against him? I imagine there will always be a fine balance.....

    Well done again, Darren.
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks again mate,

      you do a lot to keep this site alive

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    To be honest Darren, I would like to think my intentions were that noble, but - for me - I love reading and writing poetry, so my endless stream of comments and poems are purely selfish!

    All the very best,
    Ben