Comments : That first deal thrashed out. Fallen Angel 14

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Darren - this is brilliant. The best yet, in my opinion. There is comedy to this piece, of course - but that is the superficial side of this poem. It's real excellence comes in the bitter truth of it. I was actually sad by the end of it; I was expecting a comic twist, but the truth of it hit me first, if that makes sense.

    Darren, I know I go on, but these really are exceptionally imaginative pieces you have penned; well done!

    All the very best,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks again Ben, you have done really well to keep going.

      I appreciate your effort

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    No effort, Darren - a pleasure.