This really is a very clever write indeed, and thank you for the information regarding the form - I had never even heard of a diatelle.
I hope this is nominated - it deserves to be, but I am out of votes!
All the very best
When with you I lay (diatelle)
By Meena Krish (10)
Delightful read. Forms tend to be a little difficult, especially adhering to the rules is increasingly painful to match. As for subject matter, all I can say is, WOW! I normally don't care for sad poetry but, this poem just had the punch in the gut of memories. Reminds me of Adele's song "hello" for some reason. Wonderful write!