Hello and welcome to the site.
This poem is a great first post with a lovely rhyming flow.
All the best and take care,
Ben

Hello Tarah,

Welcome to P&Q. It's always nice to see new members.

This poem has good flow and rhyme and a message to others. Sometimes the most important lessons are learned the hard way.

Well, done and take care.

Michael

There's a sadness felt in this piece. But there's also a message that says to keep going, to learn from mistakes and this time learn to be patience.

Thanks for the read. Welcome to poems and quotes.

Tarah, a great write from you with a deep message that we should just live our lives and if love comes to us then let it because usually you'll get played or used. You have got to remember to take the rough with the smooth and though there are times you want to give up on love, don't because someone, somewhere will be searching for you too.

Take care, Em