Ah, what love can do...

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Brenda,

reading this poem of a universe where there are many possibilities, but where personal will forces fate to arrive at the same spot, time and time again is a superb concept.

When our lives feel perfect for us, why would we ever want that to change?

Your layout really adds to the feeling of a universe looping around and surrounding a good timeline, one where Brenda is happy and content.

I like that one too!

Take care,

Michael

Brenda,

I can't believe that I missed this one. It's a stunning write. There's almost a marvellous, uncontrolled free-falling-into-love feel to this piece as you near the end, made possible by your wonderful layout.
If we can find that 'constant' in a world that shifts and spins around us; if we know that there is always that someone that is not only going through it with us but supporting us too, then we are very lucky indeed.

A wonderful poem, Brenda.

Ben

What a beautiful piece.

Em

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Thank you all! Yes, Brenda is very happy. I never thought I would ever find that one person who makes me so very happy. He is my universe and I would travel space and time again and again to be by his side. Thank you all again! I don't think you will ever know how much your comments really mean to me-hugs-

You are my only reason
I would brave
being burned
by the sun,
charring my wings,
sending me plummeting
into the depths
of the sea.

Love makes you do incredible things!

Very beautiful poem, Brenda!