Hello and welcome to PnQ,

I like the concept of drifting off into into a reflective window, seeing an outer light, but then that light taking you on a journey of self analysis. The rhymes are punchy and reflect the dark spin on a life.

Well done, a well written poem.

Take care,

Michael

Welcome to P&Qs.

The light helping is reflect on ourselves is a wonderful image especially as it often happens. We all need time to reflect on things, bad or good.

Take care, Em