Comments : I Will Be Okay

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What an inspirational and moving piece of poetry that really carries a punch, helped in no small part by the effortless rhyming and flow.
    This is a real stand up and shout at the wind poem! well done,

    SL

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! I appreciate you taking the time to do so! :)
      Take care!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Ren, a real raw piece filled with inspiration. We can all learn from this because no matter how a person tries to break us we can bring something out of it that yes, we will eventually be ok but that we were the beer person.
    All the best, Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Hey Em,

      This is very true. Being able to rise above what tries to bring us down can be the hardest and most painful thing to do. However, it can be done, and no matter how broken we become, there is always a way to put the pieces back together again, and come out a stronger person in the end.
      Thank you so much again for reading!

      Sending light and love your way,
      Ren

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Ren

    Well penned piece. . I like the vision of a courageous woman talking here ...

    Well done..

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much, Gel! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Whatever makes you, will stretch you. Pain comes to widen reasoning!
    Incredible show of raw faith. That's the spirit that makes difference!
    Bravo!

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much for reading and taking the time to comment- you speak very true and wise words! I appreciate it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Lvi

    Yes!
    The belief in yourself that you demonstrate through the piece is refreshing and inspiring.

    Truly liked it. :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much Lvi!!! :)