Comments : Everytime the Cloud Kisses the Moon

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gel,

    All I can say to this is that I hope he reads this and doesn't make you wait too much longer.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hahaha..lol... he will never do that..he's more attached to current events than this.. he hates poetry...he never read any...never ...
      But still, I wrote this and will be writing more.

    • 1 year ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    I scanned this lovely write from top to bottom and in my view this write deserves great credit. I felt the emotions of sadness touched my heart.

    As I was going through this write I got some beautiful sad imaginary about you. ----

    Title - True love always wait.

    A beautiful lonely lass in a castle, sitting by the window waiting for her lover. She would always wear a beautiful dress and expensive jewelleries only for him. The miraculous blue moon light is focusing on her pulchritude through the glass window. She would see the beautiful surroundings of night: owls, far mountains, distance castles, etc. She would cry often from night to dawn, all she wanted was to get in the warn arms of the lover. She kept on waiting for years but still he didn't come.

    ..................Curtains falls............................................

    You can write a poem on this theme too, by creating a nice ending. Like - Her lover will come at the end and will take her far from this sinful world, far away from the sever seas upon the mountains where angles dwells.

    Your this romantic poems makes me to feel great love once again. Nice work.

    - Augustus Black

    • 1 year ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thanks Augustus for this wonderful comment .. I will try your suggestion soon...

      Your tale was lovely.. my sister would love that lol..

      Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by EVERLUCENT

    Now I have an idea for my next story. Lol

    Nice poem.

  • 1 year ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Breathtaking, fantastic write with beautiful flow and imagery. :)

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, this is super sweet and I feel how loving you are in this write. Beautifully written, Gel.