Brenda. What a wonderful piece. I truely enjoyed..

Brenda what a truly beautiful dedications to that one person you song from the same song sheet from. I believe when you find that person there's no going back.

Em

I got the feeling that this song must be been written for someone beloved. The last segment says it all how comfortable and wonderful you feel with him. Oh, Wow! This love is walking with a smile on the song tune. Nicely written.

Brenda, I was scanning your back catalogue in the hopes that I would find a gem that I had missed and here we have one. Firstly, let me apologise for letting it fly under my radar to begin with!
This is a lovely piece with some lovely use of metaphor sprinkled throughout.

With my harmony in discord,
I gathered the broken pieces
and sought shelter
from the storm.

^^

I particularly liked these four lines.

Well done on this and all the best as usual.

Ben