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  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yakori,

    This is a wonderful piece, rich with imagery and beautifully written.
    The layout you have employed works well and I particularly enjoyed the subtle sprinkling of alliteration throughout.

    All the very best to you,

    Ben

    • 9 months ago

      by Yakori bint Muhammed

      Thank you Ben for your feedback. Am truly grateful.
      Blessings to you.