This is so sad but beautiful in how heartbreaking and yearning you have conveyed in your write. It's so easy to lose yourself in a relationship, harder still to find yourself again. Well done-

This is so sad I can feel it....

I love you, without ever touching those lips.
Those chords that bloom lilies in your lungs,
how I haunt your mosaic dreams of cathedrals
where martyrs and saints dance on pipe organs,
playing harps into the most quiet, tormented minds.

A poetic stanza. ... well done

Gel

This is a super piece of writing. As sad as the content is, the sheer poetry of stanza 3 is nothing short of beautiful.

Well done,

Ben

This is a sad piece but reading it is a joy. Each word knitts amazingly into the other creating a perfect imagery .Lovely read

This is superbly written, so sad. No words can describe how this made me feel.

Em

Congratulations. A lovely poem and worthy win.

Very worthy win.

Congratulations on your win, I loved it from.the moment I read it.

Good stuff. Loved the descriptions and word choice. This is a fav; ...for we traveled
galaxies together, and though I always knew the distance back to your heart...