Comments : 21 years

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    This is so sad but beautiful in how heartbreaking and yearning you have conveyed in your write. It's so easy to lose yourself in a relationship, harder still to find yourself again. Well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    This is so sad I can feel it....

    I love you, without ever touching those lips.
    Those chords that bloom lilies in your lungs,
    how I haunt your mosaic dreams of cathedrals
    where martyrs and saints dance on pipe organs,
    playing harps into the most quiet, tormented minds.

    A poetic stanza. ... well done

    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a super piece of writing. As sad as the content is, the sheer poetry of stanza 3 is nothing short of beautiful.

    Well done,

    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by The Po whet

    This is a sad piece but reading it is a joy. Each word knitts amazingly into the other creating a perfect imagery .Lovely read

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This is superbly written, so sad. No words can describe how this made me feel.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations. A lovely poem and worthy win.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Very worthy win.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win, I loved it from.the moment I read it.

  • 11 months ago

    by yogi73

    Good stuff. Loved the descriptions and word choice. This is a fav; ...for we traveled
    galaxies together, and though I always knew the distance back to your heart...