Comments : Prisms (Acrostic + Rime Couee)

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi,

    thanks for introducing this form. .. I liked it and your poem as well.... well rhymed and nice message. ..

    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very clever, Jessica, with a nice little slant rhyme between 'siren' and 'sovereign'. I really do love these mixed forms from you and the imagery you always seem to muster never ceases to surprise me.

    Well done. All the best,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by stormingdance (Jessica)

      Thanks Ben! :) I am working on more. I may need suggestions for an Acrostic+Triolet form. Several of the lines repeat so I am trying to think of the perfect 8 letter word!

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Jess. What a lovely form of writing.. :) I may have to try this! Well done :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Jessica, another unique write from you-I love the forms you used and the story it tells-well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Jessica ,

    this is a powerful write. ..

    Shattering earthquakes with my roar
    Making what is mine, also yours
    Surviving - sovereign

    Very well said

    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Pure genius