Comments : A wildflower

  • 11 months ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Subtle. The imagery is brilliant. (red or white flower, clay pot, under the oaks).

    The last line, though, shifts the whole perspective. Appeasing the soul - possibly calming the spirit, becoming steady & "solid color" and, in a much more innocent concept, washing the soul clean like penance.

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Did you write this for me lol.. Kidding aside
    Fantastic as always loved the last line

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lucero,

    This is excellent. I thoroughly enjoyed it quite a few times.

    Well done and I'm glad this is nominated.

    Ben

    • 11 months ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Mr. Larry, Em, and Ben.

  • 10 months ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely! Your descriptives are spot on-

  • 10 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Luce,

    another EXCELLENT piece from you. ...

    hugs

    Gel