Comments : Wilted Rose

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I liked this. Thank you for sharing.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Wow this is extremely powerful and I like how it reminds me of beauty and the beast one of my fave Disney films, still.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Denise Jefferson

    This is so sad, the process through the end of love. Really good

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Reading this poem reminded me of Walt Disney’s Beauty and the Beast.
    The rose petals in the jar was the time that was left to make love blossom
    before it wilted. Yet in this write the love that blossomed was wilting unable
    to save the bond that flourished once before.

    Within the lines one can see the heartache and the desperate attempts
    been made to save love and the regret and sadness the writer experiences
    due to the death of love/rose. It makes a nice story and I liked the images
    which touched me through out this read.

    • 1 year ago

      by Savannah Hunter

      Hi.
      I'm glad you were able to understand this one, as it took me some time to figure out how to properly tell this one. This story was fragile, and hard to write and I didn't take writing it lightly. It was like taking the most vulnerable piece of me and putting it out there for everyone. Anyways.. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    It did remind me of Beauty and the Beast... I love the whole story of the wilted rose... It's sad that it ended that way.

  • 1 year ago

    by Evanescent Moon

    Wow this... This is enchanting! Amazing take on this story, beautifully written.

    • 1 year ago

      by Savannah Hunter

      I thought you might like it. :) it's kind of the opposite of yours and when you read them back to back it's kind of both versions of this story and it's awesome.