Mr Darcy. Well done on amother great sonnet.
I love the layout of this and the spacing. Well done.

Thank you, Deeply. I am glad you like the spacing; this is a little something I am trying out.

Another fantastic sonnet. You're getting a dab hand at these Mr D.

Em

Beautifully written. I agree with 'Deeplydesturbed' the layout is very pleasing to the eye.

You know what caught me to read this Sonnet...the layout the spacing between each line. Usually Sonnets verses are written in stanzas and yes they look cluttered to me but that is how its written. But this just felt a bit more nice to read and not seem cluttered.

The poem itself holds a lovely accent of English if that made sense. Its feels realistic and pleasing to read along with a flow..good write!