Comments : Rainbow dreaming (Shakespearean sonnet)

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mr Darcy. Well done on amother great sonnet.
    I love the layout of this and the spacing. Well done.

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Thank you, Deeply. I am glad you like the spacing; this is a little something I am trying out.

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Another fantastic sonnet. You're getting a dab hand at these Mr D.

    Em

    • 11 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Lol - I thought, I best practice before next week workshop!

      BTW - Thank you. :O)

  • 11 months ago

    by Kasie

    Beautifully written. I agree with 'Deeplydesturbed' the layout is very pleasing to the eye.

    • 11 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Thank you, Kasie. It's amazing what a bit of spacing can do!

  • 11 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    You know what caught me to read this Sonnet...the layout the spacing between each line. Usually Sonnets verses are written in stanzas and yes they look cluttered to me but that is how its written. But this just felt a bit more nice to read and not seem cluttered.

    The poem itself holds a lovely accent of English if that made sense. Its feels realistic and pleasing to read along with a flow..good write!