Comments : Absolute Daydream

  • 11 months ago

    by Kasie

    This is sweet and beautifully written. Well done you two

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Ladies, does Ben. P know you're writing about him again? To be honest it makes my green eyes gleam...

    No, you make my mind scream!

    Good job and nicely presented. X

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ladies, as Michael alludes to, this is clearly for me and all I can say is that I have ever had that effect on womankind world over, lol

    Well done - a lovely piece

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Gel, I enjoyed working with you on this and look forward to doing again in the future..

    Now Michael/Ben.. What gave us away lol ;)

    • 11 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Em,l I enjoyed working with you too..Thanks for asking. ... I'm happy to meet your expectation...haha lol. ..

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

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  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Can i just say, of course the boys think this is about them... sorry Benny and Michael.. but its really about me. :P
    We all know they both love me more! ;)

    haha

    girls - well done!! This is brilliant, flawless, the flow is excellent! I cant tell who did what (YAY!!!)
    i love the layout!

    Well done! its a 10/5 from me!

    • 11 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Naomi,

      hahhah. ..let the guys assume hahaha. ..you guess who did what. .lol....Thanks for the vote

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ladies, wonderful write! This is such a sweet long distance love write. It flows like a song, well done-

  • 11 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    The thing that is making this write amazing is a very good slide of blissful rhyming. Very adorable, peaceful and honest write. 5/5

    Nice job from both.

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Thanks everyone, means alot :)

  • 11 months ago

    by ketaki

    Nice poem, wonderful imagination.

  • 10 months ago

    by Marvellous

    What a power shelled in two like minds! Wonder minds, like I always tell.. What manner of heart, you must have; for this very dear dream maker! Who believes finds Life possible.
    +1!

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Angel and Em...a beautiful collab!