Oh meena, this is a beautiful form and a lovely poem!

a beautiful poem.

Meena,

Your knowledge and execution of formed poetry really is marvellous; I have learned so much and had my interest piqued on numerous occasions by your writes.
This is lovely and was a pleasure to read.

I hope you are well,

Ben

Meena, such a beautiful write!

Meena this is wonderful, I've heard of this form although have never tried it.

Sometimes writing in forms ( although i love it) can be hard to do as the piece can sometimes sound forced due to the restraints imposed by the rules, here is far from the case, your poem flows nicely within the form and your word choice is great!

Great Job

Ben

Very clean cut! There are so much detals and expertise in writing this poem that do not come to the eyes, making it so easy and wonderful to read.