This is just an older piece from years ago. Randomly came across it and thought I'd share.

Vicente,
wow! what a stunning piece! the visuals are spot on.

Well done

Vincente, wonderful write- I liked how you put this all together. Well done-

"Suicide is bittersweet"...I read this line and the first thing I think is... how so?

Then I continue to read your poem and suddenly that first line makes all the sense in the world. The way you have taken suicide and the ways to do it and given it a good side...a lighter side...is phenomenal. People do not usually think of suicide being anything but negative...yet, here, you've taken that stigma and placed it in the light. It's the release that people forget...and often don't realize...that people seek. To get away from it all. To no longer feel pain. To no longer hurt.

Then the last few lines...wow. The beauty in the world that can take the darkness away.

This is amazing and very well written. Fantastic job!

This is really good. I can't even pick just one thing I like about it. This is amazing.