Comments : Midnight at the Oasis

  • 5 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Dark and 'real' write Poetess.
    A sad reflection of today's society and its ills.
    PPx

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some wonderful imagery throughout this rather dark poem. Clever stuff.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 4 months ago

    by ddavidd

    There are the the rang of emotions this piece provokes in readers but the paradise in the end put everything in perspective.
    wonderful work!

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Love love love this!!