thanks Em, no need for applause although is appreciated
6 months ago
You are my favorite poet on this site. My god man how i would live to pick your brain. The thing i love about your poetry is that you leave the reader many ways to dissect the poems. So many meanings and possibilities. The was added to my favories quickly. With that being said.
My best guess to what this is about is probing the mind of a madman?
I think this could be about a child OR someone who was a child at one point and has suffered some kind of trauma. And as you read on you get to see through the eyes of this person. And the more in depth they become the more insane they are. Or you could read this as through the eyes of a person and how we see their dream. But either way this is freaking brillant.
I loved the visuals here because you do not hold back at all. And the poem reads like someone going insane, and you get to see clearly their perspective. I find perspective poems difficult, but you did so well. Anyway i wish i could nominate. Well done.