Comments : It Isn't Fair

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Lovely poem with a lovely form. I love the lines leading to the ending.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Hey,

    1) I feel that if you truly love someone they'll always be in your heart no matter what they've done.

    2) You are what you make yourself. You can be strong and you tough if you want it hard enough believe me I've been there.

    3) Ok, so you love someone and you want the best for them. You don't want them hurting or worrying but they will, we all will but with someone's love it'll help those feelings.

    4) This says they've left.. maybe to soul search but who knows. Hopefully they'll be happy as you wish.

    5) Now I feel this is about a long distance relationship as I feel the longing for this person and it hurts doesn't it.. they say distance makes the heart grow fonder but sometimes just sometimes it's makes it worse.

    6) I feel the anxiety here and that you feel paranoia etc will ruin the relationship you have.

    7+8) You want them all to yourself (not saying your a bit on the side) because right now all you have is their words, their promises...

    Maybe I am completely wrong but anyway that's my.view.

    Em