Comments : To Regain Strength

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, Everlasting, you have captured that feeling's right the the center getting bigger...then smaller...but it's right there. Awesome write!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    Oh this is excellent and beautifully written! I agree with Mel, you captured this perfectly!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello, Lucero

    As sad as this piece is, there is a certain inspirational quality to it, too. The pain may never fully retreat, but a fortress can certainly be put up to keep it at bay.
    This reminds me of something I heard once. If you are consumed by fear or pain - completely overwhelmed - give it five seconds. Let it rage through you and have its way, but when you get to 5, it stops and that's it. Throw everything you have at it and don't let it in anymore.

    I hope you are well and all the best to you as ever,


  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Pain can make us stronger or defeat us and as Ben said there's an inspirational part to this which says "don't let pain win"