Hi, Oriada. Firstly, welcome to the site! What a stunning first poem, short and yet so thought-provoking. I had to google the meaning of the title and wow, it fitted well with how you structured the poem. Very unique. I like it. Well-written!
10 months ago
Welcome to the site. This is an intriguing write; the title is very fitting, and this poem is filled with a sense of 'bruised nostalgia', if I can call it that. Well done!