I wish I knew too

I enjoyed this. The sentiment, the beautiful language, all ties together with some wonderful lines, like "And of love that spans the space" in the fifth stanza. 'Spans the space', oh I liked that very much.

I would say my favourite stanza was the third one. It had a wonderful flow about it, and a charm I can't quite articulate at this moment, sadly. But it was certainly an enjoyable piece.

A very nice piece,speaks volume of yearning for love.well done.

How you write such pieces. I mean I am totally jealous of you. I don't know what inspired you to write this poem. You know they say love is the most beautiful feeling, but you made love even more beautiful in the eye of the reader. Especially in the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th stanza.

Lovely piece Miss M

Such sadness and joys of love

Much warmth

Michael :)

That's one lovely poem Mel..! It's rhythmic and the imagery is vivid.
Well done!!!