Comments : Wrong To Belong

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    This resonates so much with me that I found myself nodding along. Great rhyming and love the second stanza the most. My only advice (take it if you will) is to centre the piece as the lines are different lengths but that's just my opinion and one I learnt from someone on here

    Take care
    Em

    • 2 months ago

      by Gwenyth Hill

      Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!