Comments : Stillborn

  • 8 months ago

    by Mayday

    Wow, this was very well-written. An amazing description of what it's like to be uprooted and left without the person you've counted on the most, whose always been your rock-your security blanket - and then to just not have them anymore :( It captured that sense of desolation so well. Please, Keep writing!

    • 8 months ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thank You very kind comments

  • 8 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Many images ran through my mind as I read this
    and the pain this read portrays stabs the heart...
    a moving write.

    • 8 months ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thank You I appreciate your kind comments