Comments : I Don't Like Custard

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    ok this is fun because of all the differences which makes a less boring life, the rhyming is smooth and the punch line pretty powerful which is why it'll get my nomination as we may all be different but as you say why all this hatred?? you don't see illnesses discriminating

    • 6 years ago

      by Paul Hirst

      That's True discrimination is a human illness im sure Em
      Thank You

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    I really enjoyed this and the title. Great message!

    • 6 years ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thanks Mark Appreciate your comments cheers

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is brilliant! I actually think homophobia is a very useful filter in immediately weeding out the idiots that I'd want nothing to do with ... anyone secure with their own sexuality doesn't give a flying fig about how someone else prefers to have sex!
    The pointlessness of it all is so well expressed here. Love it! :-)
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Your to kind KCL thank you that's very nice of you and I agree with you regarding people you don't need around you

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Amen brother Paul! Well stated, loved this!

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love the flow of this piece and how you used such interesting stanzas to get your point across. Nicely penned.