by Em
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ok this is fun because of all the differences which makes a less boring life, the rhyming is smooth and the punch line pretty powerful which is why it'll get my nomination as we may all be different but as you say why all this hatred?? you don't see illnesses discriminating |
by Paul Hirst
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That's True discrimination is a human illness im sure Em |
by Mark
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I really enjoyed this and the title. Great message! |
by Paul Hirst
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Thanks Mark Appreciate your comments cheers |
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This is brilliant! I actually think homophobia is a very useful filter in immediately weeding out the idiots that I'd want nothing to do with ... anyone secure with their own sexuality doesn't give a flying fig about how someone else prefers to have sex! |
by Paul Hirst
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Your to kind KCL thank you that's very nice of you and I agree with you regarding people you don't need around you |
by Brenda
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Amen brother Paul! Well stated, loved this! |
by Paul Hirst
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Thank You Brenda |
by BlueJay
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I love the flow of this piece and how you used such interesting stanzas to get your point across. Nicely penned. |
by Paul Hirst
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Thank You Bluejay |