Comments : Broken strings

  • 1 month ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Mjchael one interesting yet to me sad one. I picture a clock and the pendulum eventually stops. It just don't work any longer. I also see emotions who are not at their best anymore. Add to my favorite. You got my attention here. All the best hugs

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar,
      Tough times now passed :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Love all the metaphors Michael. A sad tale of love's end, beautifully set out and worded :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty :) lovely comments x

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, such a poignant write. A lost love, learning to let go and the pain with all of it. So well done- hugs-

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    I've read this countless times now and still find no words...

    All the best
    Em

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank You Em :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    No words...you know how I relate with this. Just brilliant once again!

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel, yes only too well :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Fredy

    Great poem, I love the format as well, you have really mastered it!!

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you ROAM and for reading :)