Comments : You babe

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    You have a talent for drawing the reader in to the narrative you weave with simple and relatable topics, but portrayed as an extended metaphor that, more often than not, makes me smile at the end.

    I'm sitting here reading about puzzles and how they relate to my life, and then the the last three lines hit home and here Tony is- in stunned silence in his car about to go into work.

    Seriously. Well done.

    • 6 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Awe tony hahaha. Thank you so much, I’m so glad my writing has a good effect on people. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Brilliant concept BT, written in your trademark conversational tone that takes us with you through your thoughts. Fab stuff! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    I love puzzles and loved this poem - thank you x