Comments : Perfectly Imperfect

  • 9 months ago

    by Hales

    Oh, this is absolutely lovely... It reminds me so much of one of my favorite songs. "Walking wounded" by Don Francisco.

    Absolutely stunning write!

  • 8 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sad piece either way, but if this is autobiographical, then it is even more so. Still, it is tinged with real beauty and hope at the end there.
    Well done, Ren.

    Ben

  • 8 months ago

    by Tony

    Good to have you back! And yes, definitely beautiful. Take care love.

  • 8 months ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    100% relatable for me

  • 8 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Ren

    a heart-felt piece, which reflects your courage and strength. Scars are reminders to what has happened in our lives, we never ask to be wounded in the first place, but we fight on lady!
    A really well written piece, albeit with a deep sadness
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Ren, this is just beautiful. When you've been in one of those relationships that have torn you down and just about destroyed you and that day comes when you can finally see the real you in that mirror. It truly is beautiful. You know you have survived the storm and are still standing. Hugs my friend-

  • 8 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Ren, I just want to say one thing.
    Love button has been clicked.

  • 8 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Heartbreaking in a way yet so very powerful and beautiful

  • 8 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Ren ... you've described every woman ... ever! Brilliant :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 8 months ago

    by Mark

    Congrats on the win!

  • 8 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations Ren!

  • 8 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Well deserved win congrats

    Sg

  • 8 months ago

    by Nee

    I love your opening lines. Congrats on your win :) the best thing about your poem is that it's so simple in structure and words but so very deep in meanings.
    Lovely piece.
    Don't stop writing!

  • 8 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Dear Cowgirl...it's amazing how you can cut deep with your words. It's a beautiful poem of strength and I am very glad that it graced the front page! There is so much in this very short piece! Congrats on your win!

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Y'all are seriously the best!! Thank you so much for reading and for all of y'alls amazing comments!! I appreciate every single one of ya!! <3 thank you thank you!

  • 5 months ago

    by Kelz45

    Beautifully written. Short yet, full of passion and powerful

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! :)

  • 4 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I think a person's scars often become the beauty that we all see.
    After pain we heal, becoming more resilient, stepping with wary steps until a helping hand shows us how to find courage and trust.

    All the best. X

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      Beautiful and wise words to live by :) thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment!! Take care :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    I see a mystery hidden here, which is glorifying this poem. A very wonderful work, written cunningly.

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so so much!!