Comments : Move your wings

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Brilliant poem and very effective use of repetition. I shall be reminding myself to move my wings from now on ;-) x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Thank you for reminding me 'to move my wings' for this to me makes me believe each of us have wings to be able to grow I have confidence etc etc and we are all pretty perfect in our own ways even though we make mistakes because afterall we're all human though some of us breech that piece of knowledge and unfortunately use it to their advantage and indeed end up taking advantage. Hope my comment make sense and I truly believe this is acknowledged for the superb piece it is... I'd like to nominate but I'm all out