Comments : Wings of a Butterfly

  • 5 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    I kinda like and kinda don't like the '..'. Haha. But it's stylistic, unique, and somewhat gives an emphasis for the next line, I like it for that. Metamorphosis! Haha. The metamorphosis of a butterfly is one of the most amazing things in this world, it has been a subject of many poems, essays, stories, or other literary writes each one gives different interpretations leading to only one meaning -- being free and beautiful. Good job here! Keep penning! (:

    --- MKKK

  • 5 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    I kinda like and kinda don't like the '..'. Haha. But it's stylistic, unique, and somewhat gives an emphasis for the next line, I like it for that. Metamorphosis! Haha. The metamorphosis of a butterfly is one of the most amazing things in this world, it has been a subject of many poems, essays, stories, or other literary writes each one gives different interpretations leading to only one meaning -- being free and beautiful. Good job here! Keep penning! (:

    --- MKKK