Comments : Revelations

  • 5 months ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    It is so great for a revelation. Very well said! I love the lay-out, gives more power to your lines! Wonderful write!

    --- MKKK

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I fail almost as many times as I try.

    ^^

    'almost' being the operative and crucial word here. As long as you are trying more than you are failing, you will keep your head afloat.

    Take care

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Risqué,
    Truly a great piece. Written to reveal your expression :)

    Michael x

  • 3 months ago

    by Noureddine

    Very nice poem I like the contrast in it you say that I am worthless
    reckless
    careless
    meaningless...
    And you come and say again
    But I am precious.
    And I am loved.
    And I. Am. Worth. It.