Comments : High Voltage

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Aegis, as always I find your writes fascinating. Comparing yourself to a tampered transformer-loved this!

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      Always happy to oblige:)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    No one does closing drama quite like you. Excellent.

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      Your words are always kind and lovely to read:) This made my entire day!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Fantastic write, as always!

  • 7 years ago

    by Megan Chapman

    What a great write! Love your closing lines.

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      I'm glad you enjoy them, I work very hard to find the right words to pack a punch.

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Congrats on the win!

  • 7 years ago

    by Tanya Southey

    Fabulous!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Great imagery combined with deep emotion.

    Well done on your win.

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      Hopefully I'll have plenty more to post soon! Thank you:)

  • 7 years ago

    by Sagedream

    Its So Lovely I Got To Go Hug A Transformer

  • 7 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    This poem is very powerful and on the contrary, the poet did express something which is hard to express even in the most powerful of words, but you have worded it so beautifully, so powerfully are your feelings expressed in few words, that 'I AM COMPLETELY BLOWN AWAY' by this piece. Sometimes the hardest things we go through are of such "high voltages" that surviving is difficult, but surviving is important and living is essential. Your portrayal of feelings of pain in metaphors of power lines and wires and voltages, I knew this was going to be my pick the very first time I read it. Splendid.