Comments : A missing title...

  • 2 months ago

    by Kerry Gardiner

    “and I couldn’t answer,
    for I have feared that you
    would also leave me”

    This message is very revealing in terms of the soul and it’s search to trust and love. I enjoyed the raw emotion and feeling coming out through your word choice wonderful work

  • 2 months ago

    by Daniel

    Adored the ending to this, Star. I feel there’s an innocence here, and a desperation for understanding and acceptance.

    • 2 months ago

      by S.T.A.R.

      Thank you both, glad you liked the ending Daniel :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Loved the way this flowed and how you opened your heart to be fixed.

  • 2 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    An interesting read where you open yourself to the other
    and place your precious heart in love's hand. I liked the format
    of this write and the way it flowed...well penned.

    • 2 months ago

      by S.T.A.R.

      Thank you Meena :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The imagery in this is dark and fascinating all at once!