wow that was a great poem it all ran together smoothly. Keep up the great writing can't wait to see more of your work.

Hey
I thought your poem was very powerful and from your soul. GREAT job!! I cut also and know what a vicious cycle it gets u caught in!! But we can be strong and get through it!!!
I wish nothing but the best!!!
luv elizabeth

It was great! Except it kinda confused me at parts, you should put some sentences in there instead of it being one paragraph :)
Thanx for commenting mine!

-luv Ali