Comments : A Love I Cannot Share

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Im glad that you liked it.. and i really appricate your comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Krillin

    really well written. And I agree with Lucifer, You should tell him before the secret gets too hard to bear.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    Yea, A crush can definitely crush you:p. I think you did good job for your first love poem. It's kinda sad in way...I think you lost your happy thoughts:p. Nice write;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    thanx ppl.. I really aooreciate everyones comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    *appricate

  • 19 years ago

    by iwish0207

    hey i think this poem is really great but i dont write love poems. but writing though cuz i think this is great!!!!!!! ~michelle~

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    thanx ppl.. but this is not my first poem, this is my first love poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    oh and thanx you very much for the spelling correction Friends.. and everyone else thanx you for the comments i read them all the time and I always love to hear what people think about my poems.. have a good day.. oh ps please take a look at some of my other poems and dont forget to vote and comment

  • great poem i can totally relate thats how i feel with one of my best friends great poem and excellent for ur first time writting a love poem
    Dee

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Yep...this happens to me once...and yep...he did turn and walk away...but hey...no matter what...tell the ones you love that you love them...cause sometimes...things might end up differently...