Lol .. Loved it , Awesome Job ur a gr8 writer and dont let anyone tell ya any differnt, and if they Do there WRONG .. I loved this one and I read a lot of ur other ones there cool too .. but I just picked this one out of the ones i read to comment on ya kno ? well keep up the gr8 work, and I hope you check out my poems sometime soon if u get a chance .. Keep it up .. !
I gave ya a 5 !