Comments : Living In The Shadows

  • 13 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow...deep poem. i really love

  • 13 years ago

    by Andrea

    oops. i didnt get to finish! lol. as i was saying...

    i really love this poem b/c you not only put your emotions into this poem but you can feel it, you know what i mean? its a wonderful poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Ophelia

    very compelling poem. i loved it!! i know someone like each person described in this poem. keep it up!!

    love alwayz,
    *tink*

  • 13 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Wow, wonderful job. I really loved this poem, in fact, I think it`s one of my favorites. It shows so much emotion and depth. Help your friends as best you can, they will help you back. Keep your chin up, never look down.

    Take care of yourself xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    ... Amazing

  • 13 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    Excellent poem.. speechless

  • 13 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow, that was so incredibly well written. it's tragic stories don't get me wrong but the way you wrote it was absolutly amazing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Xx_DisasterPiece_xX

    *spechless*

    whoa..you got a lot of talent girl..i know what it's like to be fcuked up, and have fcuked up friends..but different to your situation..

    keep up the good work

    -the_broken_one-

  • W-O-W I love this so much!! I can relate to a few of the stories you told...specially the bulimic one....Everything about this poem was perfect...Keep it up, please!!!

    Penny xxxxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    that was an amazing, sad, poem. I am so sorry what your friends went through! I am truly. I cant even imagine. But i could picture sumthing in my mind from yuor poem, great job again!

  • 13 years ago

    by Broken

    WOW! that was really powerful! im speechless....spectacular work!!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Heather

    Hey i really loved your poem...a couple of those things seem to happen to me but i just can't write about it and i hope your not living through to much hell at home...i'm prayin for u...love you Heather....even though i don't know you...but god does...:-D

  • 13 years ago

    by Thea

    hey hunni, if this is how you are living your life then i am sorry. what you and your friends need to see is no one can help you exept from yourself. hold eachothers hands and it will keep you safe but it will not heal your wounds. sh!t happens in live and it aint that easy to deal with. if you want any help or advice email me coz i will be there for you. and by the way you may not see it but you have everything to live for. show the bastards in this world what youre made of girl!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Eddie

    whoa hey and I though I had it rough I take it back that just beats me to the top. But, hey I understand you perfectly maybe other don't cuse there fools. They know nothing about whats going on around them. Well even though I don't know you I wish you the best in your life cause everyone desreves a little better into them but hey faith leads the way.

  • 13 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    really good poem but next time try more to match the syllables in the lines. dont worry about the rhyming. otherthen taht brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by hana

    i loved it!

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    that was an awesome poem. great writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    whoa that was so good. love it!

  • 13 years ago

    by josephine

    There are no words to express how much i love this poem, i know how this is exactly,
    just...wow
    jo

  • 13 years ago

    by JodieWatts

    Wow amazin i really relate to this i h8 my friend survive a car crash but all three of her mates died her lover died in her arms, her best mate died on impact and so did her other friend i really feel 4 her i luv er to bits she has her days and memories but she always will, but i think she has done one of the most respectable things she could do she got a tatoo with there names going across the rose. R.I.P Neil And El (elliott) Calley Keep Smilin Babe.