Comments : The opening

  • 13 years ago

    by August

    this is one of those poems that is frequently being revised. someday it will work *sigh*. but for now, it's a not-so-great poem about a really screwed up couple from the view of the abuser, not the abusee for once.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah Christine

    Everyone has different styles but thank you for the comment

  • 13 years ago

    by August

    that's funny, i didn't know being dull was a style

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow this is really good. I love the way that you worded this.. it really caught my attention. It flowed beautifully & was very well written. Great job on this!