very nice! 5/5! keep writing!

PS--thnx for commenting on my poem!

Very Good. Very Deep Poem. Great Job

This was an EXCELLENT POEM... but between you an me... I think normal is damn boring.... not fun at all... You need to go crazy... run around in the street naked............. lol nooo bad idea... But really don't be normal.. I mean if everyone was normal life would be SOOO boring.... Anywas great poem.. keep it up... Oh yeah and go crazy YAHHOOOOOO hehe
Angel

awesome, truly awesome!
lexi lou