I really enjoyed the concept of this poem, you seem really happy. Keep up the good work, and if you have a chance check some of mine out

thAnXxx FOR ur comMents ! i appreciate wat u guyz said !

and SarahB I AGREE WITH U !
Nuthin in this world lasts forever!!!!

I loved your poem. It was very true. I feel the same way. True love continues forever in our hearts, even if it doesnt work out in the real world. If i make any sense? lol.

hi :D such a nice poem :D i luved it :D keep the good work ...byee

thaaanxxx guyzz for ur comments !!

cute. :)

Auu, im glad i checked out your poems. Your a very good writter. :)
I'll be sure to leave a few comments!

Keep well
xx-Kalah

Well done very well written