Nice poem.

wow, really good. I can totally relate. good job. keep it up.

~no more

awesome poem!! i relate!! geez.. i can't keep puting awesome poem for every poem.. i thought you would have at least one crappy one..lol-no offense, but you don't!! they are all so awesome!! 5/5..yet again!!!

another amazing poem, it flowed so well. i wish i cud write like you, you ahv a lot of talent, xxxxx

Nice job I truly loved it you put emotins to words and then made it to a poem that is beautiful

keep writing love it

keep writing love it

I can relate...and I know too many others who can too...it's sad yet still beautiful for the way you wrote it.

"Someone really needs to help
And reach out their hand
They need to have hope
and want to understand"

Yes, many need that "someone" and I hope more people do before it gets too late...because there are people out there that are willing, but they have to find each other...and well...just keep writing...even if you do writing as a hobby, I bet you could make a book...I would buy it.

xxx