Wow. Just...wow.
Where did you learn to write?!
-Stef

This poem's pretty cool, I liked the ending:

I'm saying goodbye to you suicide girl

I think there's some 'your' that you should change for 'you're'. It happens to me all the time.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Fivers for you driver!
very nicely written
the "him" that she leaves for who is he?? is he some other guy or could it be god (if you belive in him,and all)??
i loved it though
~HazE

Haunting. Very well written. I like the style and flow of your poetry. 5/5 Loretta

Haunting. Very well written. I like the style and flow of your poetry. 5/5 Loretta