very good and thank you for your words I to have a special friend who cuts herself and I worry alot.

oh is this true. if it is gd look to your friend. very good poem, well written.
also, this is random, but the way you read it could reflect the kinda anxious feeling you would feel. well done!

leah I am so sorry....I'm sorry I worry you...I'm sorry for what I did. I wish I could take it back but I can't. I can't imagine how scared you are. I can't imagine what I would feel if I was in your position. I love you...

sometimes the only thing you can do is tell your friend that you want to help and that you'll be around to help. I'm sure that friend is watching your back too.

Offering someone help is sometimes all they need, they may not accept it at first but keep letting them know you are there.

They will appreicate it in the end.

Keep writing.

Nici.

This poem means alot to me cause several of my friends have cut themselves before. I know exactly how helpless you can feel :( Hope things get better for you.

*~*Rachel*~*

aww thats so sweet, sad at the same time. great job. 5/5. fantastic poem! keep it up. =]

this is a really good poem and i have nothing bad to say about it. ~sherrie~

Wow this is very good, very hearfelt... i know how you feel, my friend used to cut and i felt like i couldn't do anything about it. I hope you feel better =).

*5*

xx, PorteR

nice job, i like the story and the emotion going into it...you did nice with the first couple lines that are supposed to get the readers attention, cuase they certainly got mine, and i wasnt dissapointed, so very well done...

i didnt want to send you a private message so i just figure ill t hank you now for your comments, and that was very good advice, since my shadowmaker has been gone i havent had a more thoughtful comment...so thanks, and the rhymes werent forced, this poem was supposed to be out of it and tense, but then again, i can seriously see why someone would say that, cause at one point it felt that way...thank you VERY much
i will capitalize all my "I's from now on...
Doll Parts*

Sounds like your a really good friend, liked the poem, I read some of the others and I liked them too, I hope your friends alright and things get better for her, take care and keep writing xxx

Awe!!! Absolutely amazing. I loved it. Keep up the great work~JJ

Heartfelt.

A good poem makes the reader feel...

\5/

Can totally relate my best friend cuts herself

Reminded me of a friend of mine. She won't let me help her get through it. It makes me :( sad. Way to go.

so very sad and touching with a slight hint of desperation, great poem.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

This poem was very well written and touching. I can relate to the feeling of not knowing what to do when a friend is in need.. good work

The last line in this poem seems to be open ended which adds to the emotions in the rest of this piece. An interesting read.

Keep Writing
Nici