Very Very VERY!...(lol) excellent! Damn gurl if u wrote this...I gotta give it up to ya...Nothin Less then a 5 For you...

angelicious1

First of all, thank you for commenting on my poem.
This is a really great piece poetry! You have an incredibe writing style. It's a sad poem, and almost had me to tears. Keep up the great work, hun!

Sad and terrible in all regards. I'm hoping this didn't occur, though it unfortunately probably did. From a technical standpoint, good, emotional delivery of the tale.

Eh...That was okay

I love it!!! very sad though!! man i would've done that if that happened to me!!

This is an amazing poem hun!!! Very touching!! Keep it up
Love always
Sammy

I liked the story, but to be honest I thought the rhyme scheme was forced in numerous places. It was good, don't get me wrong, it was just awkward in some areas. Read it out loud, and if you find yourself sort of confused about a sentence, or find a line you wouldn't normally say in common conversation, then you've found an awkward line.

you never know when inspirations hit u... it may be when u r in the deepest pit.... keep it up!

omg, wow, that is an amazing poem. its so strong. amazing write. i liked it alot, thanks for asking me to read it. it was great

Hey.

That was really good and sad...Hope it's not true in any way...

-- xx

omg that's just beyond tragic, and sooooo much going wrong all in a short time period, it's unbelievably sad, and if you just invented this then holy sh it, cos it's an extraordinary idea, and the poem itself rocks, if it's true, then I'm so sorry.

emma x

This waz an excelent poem i loved it.
Will u plz if not to much trouble vote/or comment on mine and tell me the truth even if it hurts.

Hey you told me i should comment on your poem so i wanted to read it and it was really good. I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work

_Luv, Always K J._

You sed to check out your poem, so i did! This was amazing! it nearly made me cry! So powerful and filled with so so much emotion! Never stop writing, we need more poets like u xxxxx

aww well thanx for commentin on mine yours is really good....u should keep up wit it...its excellent...toodles

thank u for commenting on my poem "rain" and thank you for giving me notice of ur poetry...this poem is beautiful i adore it...please keep up the good work

AWSOME.That really got me..

Very nice poem I loved it. If It is true I'm sorry. Well thank you for commenting on my poem.

OHHhhh... very sad.... :( is this true?... we'll nicely written, but it made me sad, just to let you know. keep writing.

oh and Thanx 4 your comment. it was appreciated! ;)

CyN

Hey, thanks for the comment. Your poem was really great, sweet but yet, so depressing. I guess I just caught reading it at a bad time, because I am not the greatest lately. So, just keep writing, and take care! ~Sunshine~