OMG!! This was EXELLENT!!! You are SOOOOOO good!!!! Great Job!

I like this one too. The girl in it looks like me. That's prolly what first caught my attention.

This is a great poem..you are really talented

This is a good poem..
~emS~ xxxx

I loved it..... beautifully written!

I luv the way it written simply, wit the short phrases..but still gives out aloooooooooot of emotion. hey i notices you usually make the 2nd n 4th rime. is that on purpose, to do it often? its really good. =P

This was really sad.. but Brilliant.. You have a very good talent..keep to it!.. lol..

Sad true stoy good poem

These stories are not held up to the light enough. A thoughtful piece to be sure. This world sure can be bleak. Enjoyed the writing style.

This verse has a such a beautiful flow, rhythm yet speaks so much sadness...