i wrote this poem about my last relationship. this is pretty much how it went. hope you all like and can relate. all support is greatly appreciated.
-sk8er101-

Amazing. Spectacular. Beautiful.
-Stef

In a whole i liked it. but in the beginging the lines
"Getting harder each moment, as tears from eyes spill."
i think some words can be changed to give it more of an effect. Like
"Getting harder with each breath, as tears from shaded eyes spill."

That is so sad. I could feel the emotion. It was very well written. 5/5 Loretta